Marvin's 2nd text correction

This document is a text who speaks about which is about ! … insulate your home in 2030 } in 2013 "thirteen"
that lot of people can have his of €1,350 =} that lots of people can get up to €1,350 in grants
and these grants was were given by the government
who gives €135 million for to insulate
the number of people who need grants go to up until 2015 who need grants can get them until 2015
but this grant is make for people =} but these grants are meant for people
to reduce energy consommation =} energy consumption

Comments - the structure/organisation of your presentation was good but it is a little too short and there is no real conclusion. There are also quite a few mistakes but the quality is satisfactory.

Your mark = 11/20

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