Romain's text correction

this text deal with of insulate your home =} this text deals with grants to insulate…
some householders are in difficulties for insulate… =} some householders have difficulties to insulate…..
the government want wants to help…
and il accord the Fonds… =} and it gives/offers the Fonds…
and he it (because it's the government) helps property owners under a selting level =} a certain level of…
doub-glazing =} double- glazing
has a selling of €8,000 has a ceiling of €8,000

Comments - your presentation was too short, there are too many quotes from the text and not enough formulation !

ATTENTION ! you mustn't exaggerate too much (especially when you quote "French" terms from the text ! or when you say the words "In conclusion" or again "with the help of the government" - which is the last sentence of your presentation. Listen to your oral recording for proof) - this is not some sort of game or joke, it's training for your final oral exam.

Your mark = 7/20

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